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Gaping Hole (Free verse) by sonawrote

I wish I could forget you Strip you from my mind why can’t my heart remember that I left you behind Why don’t I want to understand this wasn’t part of fate maybe it’s because you weren’t just to date I fell in love with open heart you saw into my soul you weren’t part of the plan to fill in this gaping hole so I ran from that which filled it and dug it deep again tried to cover traces with booze and drugs and then the hole was deep as ever at the bottom was my soul and I shed these tears because you use to make me whole I know it’s all my fault cause I was too afraid to believe in something better than the choices that I made and now the choices I made are swallowing my soul cause I really wanted you to fill this gaping hole.

Goad 22-Apr-05/4:14 AM
"... so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief..."

lol. yes, it's sad isn't it? the time I spend proselytizing myself. But very astute of you to notice. This is precisely why I have multiple users on 'ranker: each represents a disjoint set of beliefs, and they waste huge amounts of time trying to convert each other to their view points. It's like Sybil, but without the satanic cults. Probably because at some deep level I just find the whole idea of satanic cults fundamentally silly.

As far as stats: I don't care a whit about your stats. If you knew me, or even if you bothered to become vaguely familiar with my posting history before jumping into an exchange and making an idiot of yourself, you would realize my comment was entirely self-deprecatory. Ok, well, predominantly. Mostly. If not mostly, at least somewhat.

As to my being sanctimonious...well...as much I love the sound of the word, unfortunately I think I swear & curse a bit too much to qualify for it as an appellative :( You can call me "fucking sanctimonious bastard" if you like though -- that would, if delivered in a properly sarcastic tone, be more accurate.




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