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Gaping Hole (Free verse) by sonawrote

I wish I could forget you Strip you from my mind why can’t my heart remember that I left you behind Why don’t I want to understand this wasn’t part of fate maybe it’s because you weren’t just to date I fell in love with open heart you saw into my soul you weren’t part of the plan to fill in this gaping hole so I ran from that which filled it and dug it deep again tried to cover traces with booze and drugs and then the hole was deep as ever at the bottom was my soul and I shed these tears because you use to make me whole I know it’s all my fault cause I was too afraid to believe in something better than the choices that I made and now the choices I made are swallowing my soul cause I really wanted you to fill this gaping hole.

sonawrote 21-Apr-05/9:05 PM
funny how you are so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief that I need to alter my appearance..... though my comment referance was to your internal ugliness. To see beyond the surface is one of my abilities, yet one of your inabilities.As far as my intellect, my stats are just fine though I feel no need to brag with numbers.... yet another thing I leave to the unfortunately less esteemed... I write to connect with others and share views... and I feel no reason to bash anyone in the manner which you do. .....For a loser that is so envious of me it cracks me up that you took the time to look up my website....and view only my pictures!
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