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Gaping Hole (Free verse) by sonawrote

I wish I could forget you Strip you from my mind why can’t my heart remember that I left you behind Why don’t I want to understand this wasn’t part of fate maybe it’s because you weren’t just to date I fell in love with open heart you saw into my soul you weren’t part of the plan to fill in this gaping hole so I ran from that which filled it and dug it deep again tried to cover traces with booze and drugs and then the hole was deep as ever at the bottom was my soul and I shed these tears because you use to make me whole I know it’s all my fault cause I was too afraid to believe in something better than the choices that I made and now the choices I made are swallowing my soul cause I really wanted you to fill this gaping hole.

Goad 21-Apr-05/4:26 AM
well, although my physical appearance is a little below average, moron is unfortunately completely incorrect. I did win that genetic lottery, somewhat, though I have frivolously pissed away that blessing over the years. In fact, I took an iq test last year in which I totally bombed and scored only 139. It's a good thing I never got around to joining Mensa or I would now have to suffer the embarassment of having my ass kicked out.




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