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Gaping Hole (Free verse) by sonawrote

I wish I could forget you Strip you from my mind why can’t my heart remember that I left you behind Why don’t I want to understand this wasn’t part of fate maybe it’s because you weren’t just to date I fell in love with open heart you saw into my soul you weren’t part of the plan to fill in this gaping hole so I ran from that which filled it and dug it deep again tried to cover traces with booze and drugs and then the hole was deep as ever at the bottom was my soul and I shed these tears because you use to make me whole I know it’s all my fault cause I was too afraid to believe in something better than the choices that I made and now the choices I made are swallowing my soul cause I really wanted you to fill this gaping hole.

Goad 21-Apr-05/4:22 AM
Woah...imagine my colossal surprise to discover the butt of the joke doesn't find the joke funny.

And you are correct, actually. In terms of physical appearance, I was definitely not a winner of any genetic lottery. How interesting to discover your primary way of judging people is how pretty their face is. I'd never have guessed that either, from the web page where you scale the picture of yourself to make you look skinny (though oddly rubbery, to be honest, sort of like the stretchy girl in the incredibles when she is stretching. Is that look in style now?)




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