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Birmingham gardens (Prose Poem) by INTRANSIT

It is good that I have come early while spring is still serene. I know how outrageous and demanding she can be. Listening, I hear Whitman running through the tall trees like a small child playing hide and seek with the birds and I can just barely smell the death of fall. I'm still too quick to pay a fountain for something it cannot give until a hot summer day while I wait for the exchange of stone to grass. At thirty-seven, I'm now aware of the specific gravity of my footsteps on the gravel path and I notice the veins running through the bark of the trees and I look at the veins in my arm. It's good to be like moss, the forgotten undergrowth, or a fanning pinecone next to a joking oak. Before I go, I take the time to watch the Koi eagerly gulping in the sliced-tomato sun's color as it warms us both.

richa 17-Apr-05/10:45 AM
Exchange rate doesn't work. The 'exchange rate' exists and is altering rather than coming on the scene (I wait for the exchange rate). The light rewards fishes because they are bright rather than because they cause no harm. Other than that good. Nice to see a block of text.




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