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Mind Set Adrift (Free verse) by RaychelW

My midnight mind is a wandering fool, a captive with unlimited freedom to explore past, present, and fears of the future. I set sail from parts unknown to places already discovered, occasionally stopping to find buried treasures full of pleasures and painful memories.

vulcan 31-Aug-02/1:41 AM
Beauty of the poem lies in the first stanza.the second one is not that original.yet it was beautiful.6




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