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believing (Free verse) by whispern_smoke_wisp

If all it takes for fairies to be real, is you and I saying aloud that we believe in fairies. Then perhaps, the same method will work on God. Please, all of you, say it loudly with me. Let's all agree to belive in some sort of supreme power. Then perhaps we could give peace a chance.

zodiac 15-Apr-05/11:05 PM
And no offense intended - really - but it seems like instead of posting a half-dozen mediocre poems at the same time, you could use your two-day limit to REALLY work on ONE of them, maybe the best one, and make it something more than mediocre.




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