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Hard Rock (Free verse) by Dovina

Precambrian limestone worn by waves fossil shells of living done crustaceans before humanity was. Hear their voices billions strong. What do they say across the years? The cliff is high and ruptured deep but not so high I could not jump and fall cushioned on a bed of sea. It takes a careful plan to land unwounded. Choice of place choice of time makes all the difference as every crustacean tells.

Caducus 8-Apr-05/7:40 AM
lines 4/5 very clever - good poem.




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