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Everything (Free verse) by RION12

You are my tourniquet. You are my infirmity. You make my imaginary thoughts go wild. You are everything I want. You make the bad things around me vanish. You make my gray skies turn lightblue. You make my pain into joy. You are everything I want.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-05/11:07 PM
You are boring me. V1L2 do you really mean to say, You are my weakness? I know I'm one to talk about cliches, but come one. Here is a rewrite just to give you Ideas.

You're my tourniquet
You're my medication
You make my head spin merry go round dizzy
You're everything I want

You make my devils turn to dust
You make the sky above sing a happy tune
You make this cage into a castle
You are everything I want

The trick to not boring someone to tears is keeping them interested in what you are saying. -4-

<3 Jason




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