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Cold Turkey (Free verse) by johnnyfontaine23

Cold Turkey, Relish...... Bread for the Soul Stale Buttered and battered Red Tomato paste Oozing Injected Satisfaction A great feed

jessicazee 22-Mar-05/11:06 PM
Make this a prose poem and it will rock, after you add a few more lines. Potential.




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