juliharrelson19 Mar 2005
"Basking beneath
All of the darkened stars"
Comment: I like that! It has opposites in it. Good word use, I think.
"Iâll build myself up
Donât rely on anyone
Because people can change
And secrets can be undone"
Comment: I like the sound and truth in that rhyming.
I think this is a good introspective poem
- juli :)