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Nonchalantly (Free verse) by Plaidypus

Nonchalantly, she said, “I’ve always had a thinner waist you and your sister do not you’re like your dad but I’ve always had quite a thin waist.” It was true: even at my thinnest point, I could barely fit into her old wedding dress which sat, wrinkled, in a box in the attic. One day, she told me I could have it which made no sense, because I was too thick That’s when eating began to make me sick.

richa 10-Mar-05/2:40 PM
Shock endings involving tragic illness, death, are not my bag, they lack subtlety. I would also suggest that the quoted bit is made less clunky to sound more like natural speech.




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