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ReplyTo a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT.

nentwined9 Mar 2005

I don't get the use of "portentously" here, though I like how it rolls. [[what portent does this state?]]

nor "a hot walk", which rolls less well repeated

piece doesn't gel for me, though I really like the individual bits not mentioned, individually.