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eat what you want. (Free verse) by burgerking33

come on now, grab that burger. you know you want to. take your diet and shove it up your yeah thats it, grasp them fries. don't be a wuss! take your conscience and shove it up your oh yeah, pick up that shake you rookie, you. see those people over there? ram one right up their you eat that burger king, girl and you be proud. because nobody can make you feel less than them. hold that head up high. you go, girl.

INTRANSIT 9-Mar-05/1:02 PM
burger, fries, shake, should all be the las words in each stanza. Put THAT in your cherry pie.

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