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Forsaken (Free verse) by DevilBuni

On my own two legs I stand With shattered heart in hand I watch you flee in fear While my eyes begin to tear Unsure of what I've done As you turn away and shun The one you feared to lose I never made you choose Content with what we had Now we are unable to go back By the path that you had taken Friendship is forsaken

zodiac 6-Mar-05/7:24 AM
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