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His Light (Free verse) by DevilBuni

There he lay dead and soulless; With wounds to his head and chest. Blood seeps through my clothing As I clutch him to my breast. Eyes frozen in an endless stare, But I can’t see him inside. My lip trembles as I tear – But I did not cry. My heart will never heal, From this fateful day. He’s still inside my soul And his light will guide my way.

that_funny_girl 5-Mar-05/9:35 AM
i agree basically with crooked_smile - but like it a little bit less - 4 -




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