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In My Arms (Ode) by jroday

In My Arms. This yearning in my heart. This confusion in my mine. The words left unspoken. Haunts me all the time. Every day I watch you pass by. With an emptiness in my life, and a hole in my heart. Where only you belong. There are nights I wake up crying, and wishing you were here. To hold me in your arms, and kiss away my tears. There is something, that keeps me holding on- What? I'll never know. But one day things will go my way. Just remember these words I say.

Dovina 1-Mar-05/9:03 AM
Drop the first line, since it's the same as the title, and change "mine" to "mind" in Line 3. Also, some of the punctuation is not needed. Otherwise pretty good.




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