poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Untitled by MacFrantic.

Dovina25 Feb 2005

Line 2: sayest is singular, they plural.
Line 3: use "thee" to stay with the old English.
Line 4: the beat is off. Try morn delays.
That's as far as I got. You've got the old (yawn)English voice alright.