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For a while I was content to be the inviting valley below your mountain. Suddenly I found myself buried beneath your Vesuvian hot ash lies that left my heart to choke hanging from its' green blood stalk a greying, lifeless, never to bloom artichoke.
zodiac
22-Feb-05/6:21 AM
its' should be its. Artichoke, what?
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