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Step Up (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

I've returned to my senses All sins well destroyed But oh no Look out Another obstacle to avoid! My mind glows and shines As the fearie, you, unwinds And eats all the butter Desend into bliss Find a way out Unpack all your fists Decide to run, uncontrollable hide I said find your way out Create ways to live - to die Shout all your mind Read and explain your favorable kind And Feather's in motion Falling all over the ground Just like your body Fragile, light angry, deployed and Another way to pout Another way to shout Another way to find your tuna fished route Loneliness and hungerness Please step up and shout...

Blindpoetry 19-Feb-05/4:07 PM
I was a freakin' tard and wrote a huge reply while not logged in. ...And it didn't register or something.

We've eliminated Anonymous comments? Crap. That bites.

So I'll say in short:
It's sort of random[ish] in the first stanza, but then i come to a point the rest of it. It's about how I am always openly opinionated with my friends, which turns into arguments and debates - which I love. And I encourage them to do so.. just..because.. It's fun for me. XD

Nothing really deep. At first it was, but then i was like... Eff the deepness, let me be real.




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