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Night scene (Free verse) by Tchur

Silver chains locked her to the bed Limbs shivering in anticipation And even before the whip descended Her voice gave rise to piercing cries.

razorgrin 29-Aug-02/11:14 AM
sort of like bad soft-core in that nothing really happens of it and I just feel like I've wasted my time. actually, i feel that way because it is bad soft-core.




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