poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Piercings by PsydewaysTears.

PsydewaysTears14 Feb 2005

The rhymes are simple but they don't stray from the topic or twist the syntax. Each set of two-lines connect. Nowhere does a rhyme create a sore-thumb of a section or an unbefitting line-ending. Obviousness doesn't make a rhyme forced.