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Girly (Free verse) by Dovina

Fingernails long clicking keys wrong until polish dries words can’t fly rubbing itchy eye mascara’s a dye hair flussed and curly but had to rise early sushi with chopsticks redo lipstick but I’m better off girly than poetess, surely this poem of mine won't seem to rhyme

Dovina 6-Feb-05/8:50 PM
Jessicazee is with me part way; Wilco is part way there; Shuushin’s Ogden Nash comparison is not a bad thing; Zodiac is befuddled as usual; but by Job, you’ve got it. At least what you say is lighthearted and heavy-handed is what I meant. I suppose it’s ok for people to get what they see in a poem, but it’s gratifying when somebody sees it the way I do.

I see your point about the last four lines.




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