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Psalm of Wonder (Free verse) by Dovina

Surely not in vain My form from dust You made So gently shaped, designed Surely You would not decay Your craft on which You worked Back to common earth again Even a peevish boy Who forms a bowl from clay Seldom in a fit of anger Decides to smash his work Will He who formed the vessel Be it out of love or fancy In an afterthought destroy it? Would He who made a forest Complete with birds and fawns Then erupt a mountain To bury it in ash? Would He who loves a people Along an Asian coast Move the tranquil sea To drown it with a wave? How wondrous Your creations seem to me How trivial and common They must be to You

zodiac 1-Feb-05/5:26 AM
In all honesty, I've become very curious lately about how this poem does work, if it does in fact work. It seems pretty obvious to me that since for God death is probably pretty meaningless, he'd have no problem killing a bunch of things, or even a bunch of things at once. It would only seem calamitous to humans and some animals, who aren't sure if there's anything after death. To use your image, since God knows the bow'l's only going to be recreated and better (ie, perfectly nude), either instantly or after the Final Trumping, what's it to him if he breaks it. But the bow'l probably thinks, Oh fuck! Why??!?!?

PS-Would you greatly mind making your punctuation consistent?




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