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Until Then (Free verse) by Katie

Take me back to nowhere and lay me by your side, and talk of things you've seen in dreams gone by. A lauging wind, a sunlit smile, a broken sky to mend, a distant shore, Till theres no more. When the night reveals the day, We'll sail away, To a distant land, with glistening sand, until then, we'll sail away, far away, into our dreams, that shine so bright, as the stars at night, Untill then we'll sail away, Far away.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Aug-02/7:04 PM
Well fucking sail away then. Or do whatever it is you have to do before you can sail away. Is this supposed to be "meaningful"? There are about 9,000,000,000,000,000 instances of writing in the world that consist of nothing but a) vague, childlike, pseudo-dreamlike imagery, b) line breaks and c) a few half-arsed attempts at rhyme, and call themselves "poems". Other people then go on to call these instances of writing "beautiful", because they apparently think that anything that's vaguely sentimental and meaningless enough to be open to their particular wish-fulfilment interpretation is "beautiful". I believe this is one of those instances. 10/10!!!




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