Caducus17 Jan 2005

Damn you're right and when I posted this I wanted the grammar cops to beat me senseless till I resembled jackie stallone. To explain my use of banshee its a female spirit which haunts in the wind so it does make sense but the meter and all the other points you mentioned are spot on.

I've done better and a lot worse but I'll let this John Merrick piece breathe itself into its own death.