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Peptalk in the Dugout (Free verse) by Dovina

Gentlemen! Listen up. Soma you are hard of hearing, so pardon me if I repeat. Let’s have a little less grabbing of crotches out there. The batter’s box is no place for fondling the jewels. Soma you guys reach down there so much it’s surprising you still got two left. Let’s get these gonad adjustments outa the way here in the dugout. I don’t want this team looking like a bunch of preverts. Okay. Let’s play ball!

zodiac 15-Jan-05/5:30 AM
If you delete my comments you are an engorged pussy.

PS-it's not astrological, fuckwad, it's television.

PPS-This comment is meant only for you. Delete it if you want, but you'll still have gotten to read about what an engorged pussy you are. Twice now.

PPPS-Of course you have the right to delete comments. Is that your idea of a fucking revelation? You also have the right to wear only a bandanna around your schlong, but if you do I'm going to use my right to laugh at you and you'll be really sad and wish it was your right to whemy yourself to death from the embarassment of it, which of course it isn't not even in California. Having lived abroad long enough to know several people who only have bandannas to wrap around their schlongs even in the thick of desert winter, I've come to realise one of the biggest problems with America is people saying "I've realised it's my right to do X" and then doing it no matter how poorly it reflects on their other, non-right-discerning powers of judgment.

And your an engorged pussy. As always,
[Captain] zodiac




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