poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Veins by helenwales.

Shuushin11 Jan 2005

"thud" implies a kind of finality - at least to me, as in it was the last heartbeat. I know, you say "metronome" later - too late.

"Faith in god, in breathing while you're asleep" does this mean god is allowing his lungs (diaphram) to contract and expand? And if this were the case, I would think such a generous entity would deserve a big "G" at least.

Can't quite get a grip on this one's meaning - could be the several metaphors - nest/nature, metronome/music, goe/religion, root/no idea. vein/medicine.

A riddle of some kind? Thinking... is this the famous egg of the Jesus Omelette??!