poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Hunny by Venus.

babbit1128 Aug 2002

Sometimes you need to look at things again, that is all. I never meant to "complain" about the ending. I simply was drawn to the beginning of the piece on first reading. It is very absorbing. Thus, when I came to the end, the beginning was still reeling and I was wondering if the ending was not anti-climatic. But I like the conclusion. I do not see Sylvia Plath in here though.