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Let God Unwrite Itself (Free verse) by daggatolar

Can the poem not rite Out the poet Lunge on the lung and life out Can the poem not rite Art Is meaningless itself not a meaning Can the poem not right The heart To stair feelings capable of everything Unmaking the maker The made is what is... writing God. The poem Can also unwrite God.

Crakyamuni 7-Jan-05/9:52 AM
This poem touches on a great deal of the metaphysical forces in written word, but in places I'm unsure of what to make of lines,(To "Stair" feelings capable of everything).

It's good, feels genuine.




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