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Comparisons (Free verse) by anagram

Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

Christof 28-Aug-02/2:58 AM
I think this is too specific to you anagram, there's lots of emotion here but it doesn't really seem solid to me, though I like your circular structure.




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