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Math Poem (Free verse) by Dovina

1-1 = ½-½ 2–2 = 1–1 Taking half from half is the same as taking two from two. ½/1 = 1/2 2/4 = ½/1 Half of a thing is the same as a quarter of two. (Hang in there, follow the symmetry.) 1*1 = ½*2 ¼*4 = 1*1 Half of two things is the same as a quarter of four. ½+1½ = 2+0 1+1 = ½+1½ Two and nothing more is the same as one and one. Subtract, divide, multiply, add. Zero, half, one, two. Can you equate the series? I wish the tools were here to render clearly, math expressions eloquently— integrals, Laplaces, differentials— love, hate, fear. It’s like painting with a greasy finger. I wonder how van Gogh might have written a poem. Yeah, I know— with a gun in a wheat field.

Dovina 25-Dec-04/11:45 AM

The use of logic does not forbid the use of emotion or romantics. I never said it does. Romanticism and logic fit nicely together in many poems. But many other poems lack logic in their romanticism, and they too can be good poems. My I cite a favorite of mine by our departed Shuushin:

Holding On by Shuushin
She would act too eager to please,
prone to furtive backward glances
as we were never quite at ease.

Secretive on past romances;
something unsettled in her past,
prone to furtive backward glances.

I asked her once what spell was cast,
lost deep in thought she closed wet eyes;
something unsettled in her past.

“I hope” said she “you realize
how difficult this is for me” -
lost deep in thought she closed wet eyes.

She clasped her hands as if in plea
then simply looked away again -
how difficult this is for me.

And so, up to the very end
she would act too eager to please;
her heart had never time to mend
as we were never quite at ease.




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