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Interstellar Hell (Other) by PsydewaysTears

Falling stars trickle down my cheek Outlining a damaged physique. They're blinding to the untrained eye But I've learned to black out the sky. My black hole beats an angry rage, Good thing I keep it in its cage. Last time I let it out to play It sucked the sunshine out of day. I wander over Saturn's Rings Thinking I've got a hold on things... But every night at ten to three, Lack of air catches up with me. My Interstellar Hell will swell Until I bid a fond farewell, To falling for the silver gleam; And living life like it's a dream.

PsydewaysTears 20-Dec-04/4:22 PM
Well I'll always be here for clarification, and it doesn't hurt my feelings to have to start up a few hundred writer-reader relationships. I'm actually honored to have my opinion sought after and maybe even, god forbid, valued. But I also wouldn't dream of stealing away any conclusions somebody might draw up for themselves, to me the magic poetry creates is relative to mind open enough to make its message their own.

•°•Gregory James•°•




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