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father Worked Nights
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Free verse
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poetandknowit
father lived in a factory. he would pound, pound and pound all night long, never stopping, never saying why. Laugh and scream, pound and pound -- no lunch hour, not even a coffee break. Pound and pound, using the cat and mother for his steel.
AnotherDay242
27-Aug-02/8:46 PM
Maybe it's not my place to say but I do understand where Swishy is coming from. It's seems like very few people on this site understand what poetry is about. It's about someone writing how they feel and about who they are. It's someone sharing a part of them. And when someone shares there poem.. it's showing their soul. So, I think we all need to remember that. When people put there thought's on this site they are asking for others oppion.. and that takes courage. (A courage I do not have which is why I will never post anything on this site.) When someone shares a poem they are asking for criticism... but that doesn't mean when critiszing you have to be rude. Who can tell a person how you feel by by polite! So just remember this please!
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