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Limbs
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
Live oak limbsâ Crooked, unorganized. Lightning boltâ Jagged, as if lost going home. Never linear for long, Deluded by fluff, Wanderers on whims. Built in an instant Or century, Like me, The easiest shape.
Dovina
10-Dec-04/10:05 AM
I hadnât thought of the lightning striking the oak, it adds another direction this thing could go. Shocked moss!
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