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Daughter (Free verse) by pkdrunner

Observe the bride stepping so radiant Her maids averting their eyes Protecting her from nervous laughter Serious young groom quietly saying words That willingly seal his fate to hers Forever after Father of the bride sheds tears of parting and hope; I didn't used to be so soft! When life was not laid out so sweet and bare

anagram 27-Aug-02/6:44 PM
I liked it as well and will give it 6 plus the 2 that Dark Angel held back 8/20




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