poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Dark Everlasting by Sean Allen.

Dovina8 Nov 2004

This is pretty good. I hope the last line is not about suicide, because if it is, then I take it back. The first verse is good. The last line of the second verse seems not to follow the theme. "and regret"??? "You can't see me so you forget." - why?