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10.25.04 (Free verse) by oneglove

You said “the moon is out today” And there it hung Perched squarely in the pale blue sky Sitting quietly like it had been there all along Strange, as it had been quite a journey Chasing his beloved day after day to no avail Her immaculate face always just out of reach And yet he persisted Each day beginning his journey anew Now he had succeeded He was face to face with his lost love And as she saw him standing there Her eyes wept in lavender and crimson Even more brilliant hues than her sad tears before For a moment life was what it could be I replied “if these ill-fated lovers can have their day, we will certainly have ours”

zodiac 4-Nov-04/5:18 AM
It's weird that you say the moon is male and sun is female. Simone de Beauvoir would be shocked into dropping her French tickler. Maybe with a hollow thud on the rug and everyone would kind of stand around pretending not to notice while she stooped quickly and maybe unashamedly to tuck it back in place because she is after all Simone de Beauvoir and if she wants to walk around with one of those clamped in her trap well she probably knows what's best for Simone de Beauvoir, doesn't she?




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