poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Beachy head by Mr Pig.

INTRANSIT29 Oct 2004

This defies standard suicidal parameters. Particularly the -many footpritnts. I think I've heard skin of water somewhere. Um, Blend the first stanza, 'liminate
the -but-. I honestly don't know the first thing about using line breaks, but for some reason I don't like the way this is laid out.

Glad to see you stopped by.