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Unwanted (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool

I sit by your side, But you treat me, As if I am not, Even there, You make me, Feel unwanted, I don't know, If you mean to, Or not, Your friends listen, To me more, Than you, Do you really care? I have to wonder, I have to ask, Because you act like, You don't even, Want me there.

Dovina 25-Oct-04/3:10 PM
The commas are mostly not right. This is not really a poem, but a statement in prose, a missive.




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