poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Feast On Me by cuddlytiger17.

cuddlytiger1711 Oct 2004

I meant the "barrier" as being an emotional shield, and it being torn apart as a target is. Now that I look at it though, you're right, it doesn't make much sense how I worded it...Maybe you have some suggestions as to how I could fix it? That is if you understand what I was trying to say now? Thank you.