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Cold Afternoon. (Sonnet) by Sasha

The many leaves were spiraled in a fall, the ground absorbing any life still left of branches growing bare and more bereft. The skies were readying a rainy pall, while men pulled on their ready coats, and all the world appeard as bracing for a storm, though none could know the fury or the form, only that it had hushed the cricket’s call, and night was on the wind -far more than one- forboded in new darkness of the sun, and skies swept clear of stars as by a hand- all hinted something mad might break the land. It wasn’t much, but caused the race of men to wonder when the dawn would come again.

Sasha 30-Sep-04/1:50 PM
having taken a look at your œvre, which at the moment consists of two posts, both of which have a rating below 5.0, I can't say the same for you.




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