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Jarooomeee (Ode) by klosterfobik

You're such a talent - so blessed. Putting other wannabes to rest. Like a big-bull writer- Like a sad,used-up fighter, You'll find in time, your skills are not so good- can't find the words,like you think you should.

Tintagiles 19-Sep-04/6:09 PM
This is without a doubt the most blatant case of idiotic self-voting I have yet seen. As a poem, this fails for a simple reason: if you start off with a rhyming quatrain, you should not round it off with three unrhyming verses even more lacking in rhythmic distinction than the first four.




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