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Parting at Morning (Free verse) by Sasha

Water. Wavers of a rose on its surface bloom. Purple in the smokey clouds seems an altar’s plume. Nightly light and nightly shadows, shadows with no end. Calm of amber, craze of ruby round the region blend. Her nice face’s magic changes heap their glory on all our tears and breath and kisses in the dawn! The dawn!

edpeterson 16-Sep-04/9:03 AM
i like it. I would kill the rep at the end, but i can see its impact.




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