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Leaving and Coming (Free verse) by Spindle

I'm leaving but I'm not ready I'm leaving and I'm gone My heart is so unsteady Once I've left I won't belong I wish I could split in half I'm selfish and I know I want to be with him, with them I love them all so I don't want it to feel this way I don't want to blame where I'm going I know it's gonna be great But I guess I'm just sad

Prince of Void 14-Sep-04/8:27 PM
i think it's good i like it.... honstely speaking




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