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Dare (Free verse) by LintyWeenis

The lights screaming by tonight is our night. My foot to the floor you're screaming my name. Like so many times before Let's see if we make it this time.

LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/3:24 PM
Well, I say it's open to interpretation because if someone reads it and thinks that this person is screaming out of excitement, well then that's what they get. I personally wrote it with that person screaming in fear because I'm about to go hallin' ass down a busy freeway. I can see where I could use some clarity but grammar?




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