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ReplyTo a comment on Love by ChefKSP.

Sasha9 Sep 2004

Aww. How distinctively pathetic.

Your Revealed feelings only prolongs the time till your heart is broken
once again??

What the fuck is that? I believe you meant "prolong" and not "prolongs." Actually, you might want to take that whole line out. Or maybe you want to take the whole stanza; it adds nothing to the poem. Actually, just take out the entire poem. It adds nothing to this site.