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~Frosty~ (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali

She was here for a reason, and taken away for none. She was here for a reason, so quickly gone. She left for a reason, it was her time to go. She left for a reason that none of us know. She left for a reason, we all began to cry. She left for a reason, we all wondered why? Good-Bye Dear Frosty, I wish you could stay. Good-Bye Dear Frosty, Go find your way. Good-Bye Dear Frosty, Go with the angels, and fly high. Good-bye Dear Frosty, We'll love you till the end of time.

Dovina 3-Sep-04/11:23 AM
This one is touching, but a little too maudlin, simple, and contradictory. I usually don't comment on these.




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