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Countervail (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera

Like stripping the head of a screw My mind suddenly went From sharp to subverted Defined to indefinite As we pushed against the wall It drew in closer Only intensifying our plight The burning stench of fear Flooding an already blanched psyche Emptiness reaking havoc on Our pitiless demise Of the wall and all against it

Prince of Void 31-Aug-04/12:18 PM
very good




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