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St. Patrick’s Cathedral (Free verse) by Dovina

Familiar themes in architecture and art Bloodstained head, hands and feet A stone beside a hillside tomb The fact of death graven In skull and grave Quiet kneeling in massive hall Alcove candles glowing dim Saints’ fixed eyes staring down Artwork preaching from thick stone walls Glass stained with Mother’s face Arms stretched to humble sheep Some may know what they seek in church And why they seek it here But in the struggle for revelation To transcend reason I must tread the lonely forests Skid about in skies and minds Looking for the strength to die Without somewhere to go

Dovina 28-Aug-04/6:12 PM
Yes, lobotomized people feel neither grief nor comfort, I am told. So, why not have your frontal lobe severed when in grief? I don't think the procedure is done anymore. And if it were, that ends all emotion. This seems like way too simple a question, and too simple an answer. You must be asking something else. Or do you belong to the First Church of Lobotomy?




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